This book is about a kid who finds out that he is a seventh son of a seventh son. After getting apprenticed to the ExtraOrdinary Wizard the main characters brother gets jealous and runs off to learn dark magyk. A bit later the brother comes back and kidnaps the princess, who the main character rescues and after a battle with his brother, takes back home.
(authors note) This is a retelling which is supposed to be as short as possible and still get the main conflicts across. That is why I forfeited the names and place whenever possible because they weren't needed.
I thought this was a very good retelling piece for how short it had to be. The only thing I would say would be to try and incorporate the main conflict maybe in the first or second sentence so it centers the piece around the main conflict. It's the same as if you were to do an essay, you would put the main, important points in the first or second body paragraph instead of in the third body paragraph or conclusion. But, once again this was a great piece.
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